“Just keep calm and let me handle it,” he said. The argument could’ve ended long ago, but neither was willing to budge. Compromise had been out of the question, but now she was weary. She handed over the reins to him because he claimed to know so much. From him she learned the invaluable lesson of trusting her intuition.

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© LeTara Moore 2016

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  • justuscreek on

    Great post, you say just enough to make me think but not so much that you’re trying to convince me of something.

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    • LeTaraWrites on

      Thank you! That’s what I was aiming for.

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  • Nam H Nguyen on

    Well written! 🙂

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    • LeTaraWrites on

      Thank you!

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  • Susan Leighton on

    LeTara- I like the way you are brief with your dialogue but you feel the tension. Less is more
    By limiting superfluous description, you allow the reader to extract their own meaning. Brava!

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    • LeTaraWrites on

      Thank you!

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      • Susan Leighton on

        My pleasure. I enjoy reading my fellow writers work.

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